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Fear- A Haiku -I think.

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So this is how it feels to fear;
All the crashing and banging and clanging.
But still silence is all you hear.
This is still a Haiku, even though the format is eight syllables- ten syllables- eight syllables.
The numbers were just changed is all. I am aware that most are five syllables- seven syllables- five syllables. And I have made Haikus in that format. This is still the same.
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Obi-quiet's avatar
Nice job. :D I like.